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Tuesday 7 August 2018

Andie the Panda-By Lolenese

Learning-Intention-we are learning to write a narrative story.
Success-Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stop correctly.

Andie is a panda. She really loves bamboos. She lives with her family and looked for food everyday for them to survive.

 One cold day Andie went to look for food, but it was  dark due to  a storm. She couldn't go out to look for food. Andie told her family that she couldn't go outside because of the storm.Then the frighting lightning  storm destroyed their house.So they have no where to live. 


When the storm stopped Andie went to look for food for her family. But there was no more bambooThe storm destroyed it all. Andie and her family were very hungry .The following day when Andie woke up she couldn't find her family.She went to look for them. She found them lying on the ground dead!.

 Andie saw campers nearby and they came towards Andie. They took Andie to the zoo because she had scars all over her body from the storm.They also knew that she was hungry.The zoo keepers fed Andie with lots of bamboo and  treated her scars.The zoo keepers thank the campers and they left happy.

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