Learning -Intention -We are learning to write a recount.
Success-Criteria-I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.
All About Me
Hello! My name is Lolenese. My birthday is on September 2009.I grew up in Glen Innes,Auckland,New Zealand.My school is in Panmure .I have one brother and one sister.
Diary of the Wimpy kid is the best book I have read.The music that I love to listen to is "my dream came true".The three wise cousins is the best movie I have seen. Andie Mack is my favourite TV show.My favourite game to play is Roblox.
In school my favourite subjects are Maths,Reading and Spelling.My favourite colour is blue. My best friend is Ellma.
I like Pandas.Water Melons are my favourite fruit to eat.
Tuesday 21 August 2018
Tuesday 7 August 2018
Andie the Panda-By Lolenese
Learning-Intention-we are learning to write a narrative story.
Success-Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stop correctly.
Andie is a panda. She really loves bamboos. She lives with her family and looked for food everyday for them to survive.
One cold day Andie went to look for food, but it was dark due to a storm. She couldn't go out to look for food. Andie told her family that she couldn't go outside because of the storm.Then the frighting lightning storm destroyed their house.So they have no where to live.
When the storm stopped Andie went to look for food for her family. But there was no more bamboo. The storm destroyed it all. Andie and her family were very hungry .The following day when Andie woke up she couldn't find her family.She went to look for them. She found them lying on the ground dead!.
Andie saw campers nearby and they came towards Andie. They took Andie to the zoo because she had scars all over her body from the storm.They also knew that she was hungry.The zoo keepers fed Andie with lots of bamboo and treated her scars.The zoo keepers thank the campers and they left happy.
Success-Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stop correctly.
Andie is a panda. She really loves bamboos. She lives with her family and looked for food everyday for them to survive.
One cold day Andie went to look for food, but it was dark due to a storm. She couldn't go out to look for food. Andie told her family that she couldn't go outside because of the storm.Then the frighting lightning storm destroyed their house.So they have no where to live.
When the storm stopped Andie went to look for food for her family. But there was no more bamboo. The storm destroyed it all. Andie and her family were very hungry .The following day when Andie woke up she couldn't find her family.She went to look for them. She found them lying on the ground dead!.
Andie saw campers nearby and they came towards Andie. They took Andie to the zoo because she had scars all over her body from the storm.They also knew that she was hungry.The zoo keepers fed Andie with lots of bamboo and treated her scars.The zoo keepers thank the campers and they left happy.
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