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Thursday 13 August 2015

Persuasive Writing: Argue Against Chocolate

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I think you should not be allowed to eat chocolates because they are not good for your teeth and they are too sweet. Chocolates rot your teeth. Eating too much can make you feel sick.
So I think children should stay away from chocolate!!.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 August 2015 at 13:33

    Kia Ora,
    Lolenese I like the way that you said children should not be allowed to eat chocolates because it is not healthy food.
    Keep it up in a good work.

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2016 at 19:33

    Kia Ora Lolenese i like the way the way that you said eating a chocolates will make you sick by brielle

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  3. Ieriko Afamasaga19 November 2016 at 20:28

    well done Lolenese..so keep away from chocolates my dear when we are going shopping next time..

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