I am a Year 4 student at Saint Patrick’s School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs.Twomey.
Friday, 6 April 2018
Ieriko - by Lolenese
Learning Intention-we are learning to write a poem.
Success Criteria I know I am successful when I can write a poem about my dad.
Short black hair,brown light skin,
Married to Aliitasi
Sibling of Saga,Litia,Naomi,Ale,Tiute,
Likes Samoan food,and ice cream,
Hates mosquito, worms,cats,dogs,
Enjoys family time, and watching tv,
Scared of heights,
Resident of Rose Way, Glen Innes, Auckland.
Success Criteria I know I am successful when I can write a poem about my dad.
Ieriko
Handsome,black eyes,big smile,
Married to Aliitasi
Sibling of Saga,Litia,Naomi,Ale,Tiute,
Likes Samoan food,and ice cream,
Hates mosquito, worms,cats,dogs,
Enjoys family time, and watching tv,
Scared of heights,
Resident of Rose Way, Glen Innes, Auckland.
Labels:
about dad,
poem storywriting.
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)